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I am not my absolute favourite,
A concoction of errors and virtues,
I am imperfect, lousy and emotional,
I am skeptical, impulsive and aspirational,
But given a wish to be reborn ,
I would still want to be this version.

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6 comments:

  1. Beautiful poem. The words express the imperfections in each one of us. Yet, we have to cling on to the soul inside us, come what may.

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    1. Thank you Francene for your lovely words. :)

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  2. Oooh, interesting thought... i think I would like to be less impatient, less needy of perfection in others, more forgiving of imperfection within myself. And actually, I'd quite like another 30 points of IQ, and a mind similar to William Carlos Williams. Perhaps I should also ask for 'being satisfied with what i have'! ~Liz My blog is at: http://www.lizbrownleepoet.com Blogger will take you to the wrong site.

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    1. Good one Liz :). Thank you for visiting my blog.

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