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POETICbug_atozchallenge

POETICbug_Zipper

Like parallel rows of metal teeth of the zipper,
You and me stand alongside in our relation,
Until the time we remain interlocked in love,
We hold our lives together, strong wedlock,
Any moment of weakness, one of us slides,
The zipper is broken for a long, long time.

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18 comments:

  1. Excellent!

    Congratulations on completing the A to Z blogging challenge!
    Don’t forget about the A to Z Reflections post coming up in May.

    --
    Tim Brannan, The Other Side Blog
    2015 A to Z of Vampires
    http://theotherside.timsbrannan.com/

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  2. I love your poem! You are very talented and have a wonderful way to express yourself. Thank you for sharing your gift <3

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  3. I'm not big on poems because I never get them but nice job and congrats on finishing the challenge!

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    1. Thank you Paulette.
      I try to keep the poems simple. I can understand your opinion though. After I have written a poem when I read the same at a later time even I fail to interpret, sometimes. :)

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  4. J here, stopping by from the #atozchallenge - where I am part of Arlee's A to Z Ambassador Team.
    Welcome to "Z-day"! (Time to watch the iZombie television series?)
    Hope to see you at the after party. I'm looking forward to when the Reflections Linky List opens on Monday, May 4th.
    I've followed your listed social media.
    Beautiful poem. Very powerful.
    -J @JLenniDorner

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  5. Nice poem and glad to meet you through top blogger... I am Martian :P

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    1. Hi Martian,
      Congratulations to you on featuring in the top blogger list.
      Thank you so much for visiting my blog :)
      I am glad you liked this poem.

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  6. Great job :)

    http://zigzacmania.blogspot.in/

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  7. Beautiful. The poem feels so true, any married couple will relate to it. Simply loved it.

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  8. Wow! what a thought!
    ...and so wonderfully penned:)

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